Today I finished a second edit. I don’t feel I could have done as much as I could to it but I think that I need a fresh look on it – some fresh eyes. So I’m going to pass it on to a few people and ask them what they think. Especially about timing. The length of the film worries me because I don’t want the viewer to get bored.
The sound isn’t quite there yet either and is not fully immersive and I want it to be. I want to layer in other sounds that I’ve recorded around the place as well it be visually layered and textured with all the lovely shots.
But some of the things that I feel need doing are:
– shortening some of the clips you see me in
– go through it again and make firmer decision on length of certain shots and also making final decision about which shots should and shouldn’t be used.